My Nana is soooo!!!! Wrinkly I used her skin as a blanket. Usually when I go to my Nana's house I play and stretch her skin and I say Mr's. Fantastic.
My Nana’s hair is very very metallic well it looks like it. She begged my mum to dye her hair black but her hair is my favourite part about her.
Just about a month ago her voice started cracking and she sounds like a broken down car and a repairman trying to turn the engine on.She keeps and keeps and keeps on coughing like Mr Poe from the series of unfortunate events.Now she has a broken coughing voice and sound like any other elderly.
My Nana smells like very hard to smell when I go into her room my head just explodes in my brain.it's kind of smells like expired cheese. 50 years expired cheese.
I like the way you are using paragraphs to write about a new idea. You are using lots of sensory language. The ideas you used in the paragraph about her croaky voice are fabulous.
ReplyDeleteYour writing needs a conclusion at the end.