Tuesday, 6 September 2016
100 word Challenge!!
I woke up,did everything.brush my teeth,comb my hair, change clothes. Then comes the bad part, Traffic. It was the worst, dad and I were waiting forever to just get out of our house!. We got out “What a relief” said dad. Were on our way, And then something even worse happened. Pedestrians. Left, right, up and down, Pedestrians everywhere. A couple of hours later we finally made it( not really). Dad forced me to walk. So of course I did. Walked and walked and walked. And just figured out, school just finished.
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I like your first sentence. You give three examples of doing everything. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI also like your use of repetition to make a point. "Pedestrians. Left, right, up and down, Pedestrians everywhere."